look! i re-did it! i deleted the other one and this one is MUCH MUCH better!
one on left is called Barphenia and one on right is called Gabriellia. they're my characters ^_^; this story takes place DIRECTLY before my Ilyia VS Egalia series ^_^;;;
the background is a screentone and i changed the color to it so yay! i think this one looks better! right?
Oh, I agree. This background is MUCH better! And it even makes the original characters look better, too (even though they were beautful to begin with). WONDERFUL job. You should be proud of this. And now I'm going to +fav.
Hmm... Now, I know it's intentional in order to show the transparency of the figures, but I think the background is a bit too overpowering in this image. My attention was immediately drawn to it instead of the real subjects. How to fix it? Either darkening the girls, or lightening the background and possibly giving it a slight blur. It's a shame to lose sight of such lovely characters just because of a strong background.